The Challenge: Write a story about the suitcase sitting on the train tracks in exactly 99 words!
“What’s in the suitcase, Ralph?”
“Well now, ain’t that the million dollar question?” Ralph smirked.
Dopey was jumping up and down, anxious to find out. “Uh…what’s in the suitcase, Ralph?”
Ralph succinctly cut his eyes to Dopey. Dopey noticed and hushed.
Ralph looked at the suitcase, thought of the deadline, “What the hell’s taking so long!?”
As if in answer, the train’s whistle blew.
The suitcase was railroaded, it toppled in the air, and fell open beside the tracks.
Ralph, Chihuahua-In-Chief, looked inside.
Dopey, Big-dog-sidekick, bounced up and down behind him…
“Uh…what’s in the suitcase, Ralph?” (99 Words)
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Chihuahua in chief, Love it 🙂
Thank you!
Fun take on the prompt with the dogs as characters!
Thank you! I had fun with this one 🙂
Come on…. What’s in the suitcase? There has to be a Part 2? Enjoyed!! Thanks for participating.
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BRAVO!